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Today I'm excited to welcome back author Anne Pfeffer. She has a wonderful guest post for us!
Really good advice is hard to come by. In fact, most advice I flee from. But I recently found two nuggets of wisdom--unrelated except that they both pertained to writers—that have helped me a lot. I hereby offer them to you.
Maintain an excellent, professional website closely geared to its target audience.
This advice may seem self-evident, but I, for one, wasn't following it. It came from Josh Adams of Adams Literary in a talk I heard recently.
Josh said to think about who the audience is for your website or blog. If you’re an unknown writer looking to win a traditional publishing deal, your website/blog audience is agents and editors. And if you’re sending out queries and submitting work for publication, agents and editors will visit your website. Guaranteed.
Therefore, your website and/or blog should be designed to impress those people only. Not your future readers, who might be fifth graders or hopeless romantics. And not your friends, with whom you gossip and bemoan all your little setbacks in life. So no cupids and hearts, and no sad posts about your many rejections. Your website should be professional and convince an agent or editor that you're someone they want to work with.
Also, to state the obvious, your website should exist. At the time I heard Josh’s speech, my own website had crashed and burned, and I’d never gotten around to reinstating it.
Boy, did I get religion fast. I should mention that I’m the author of three self-published books, but am now thinking of finding an agent for my fourth. I put together the most professional-looking website I could manage and studded it with anything I thought an agent or editor would want to know about me.
And guess what? Last week I got a call from an agent I’d never met. She had seen my name somewhere, read my website, and asked if I was working on anything new. As a matter of fact, I was! I got a request for the full manuscript.
So, thank you, Josh Adams, for advancing my career when you don’t even represent me. Now that’s a good agent!
When writing the opening sentence of your novel, remember: “Action in books for the young must start before the opening line.”
This advice is from the wonderful children’s book writer, Richard Peck. I came across it in a January/February 2014 SCBWI magazine article titled “First Impressions” by Kim Tomsic. Peck made the statement in connection with children’s books, but I would use it to start even a cook book, or a book about navigational systems in ocean liners.
I repeat: Action in books for the young must start before the opening line.
In other words, your opening line should describe an action that has already taken place. Peck used this technique in his book THE TEACHER’S FUNERAL: “If your teacher has to die, August isn’t a bad time of the year for it.”
Another example, from ALMOST MOON by Alice Sebold: “When all is said and done, killing my mother came easily.”
And from CRANK by Ellen Hopkins: “Life was good before I met the monster.”
This technique drops your reader into the middle of a river that is already rushing along, which gives the opening sentence tension and immediacy. I realized that I had stumbled onto this approach by dumb luck in my latest work-in-progress, called UNDERCOVER HAMSTER. My story starts: “The humans thought they had locked me in.” In all these examples, the action starts before the opening sentence.
These ideas are practical and concrete; they are something you can actually do. Try 'em. They work.
Visit Anne Pfeffer at www.annepfeffer.com
Description of book:
To nineteen-year-old high school dropout Travis Walker, women are like snowflakes--each one different, but beautiful in her own way.
He can charm any girl he meets, and yet down deep he fears he'll always be a loser like his jailbird father. As the landlady threatens to evict him and his sick mother, Travis takes a job he hates and spends his evenings picking up girls at a nearby night spot.
When he enlists in a teen program at the local fire station, he finds out he’s amazing at it. Then he meets the smoking hot Kat Summers, enlists Kat’s friend Zoey to help him woo her, and falls in love for the first time ever.
But he keeps the details of his life secret. His girl will never love him back if she knows the truth about him….
From the Self-Publishing Review:
Pfeffer’s characters are nuanced and delightful. The story is nicely paced with a balance of tension and resolution that kept me turning pages. But what really makes this book lovely is harder to describe. Pfeffer shows enormous empathy and insight into the complications and humiliations of poverty and homelessness without ever seeming saccharine or preachy…. I predict you will be hearing more about this talented new author. “http://www.selfpublishingreview.com/blog/2013/05/review-girls-love-travis-walker-by-anne-pfeffer/
Awards
Named one of the best indie books of
2013 by IndieReader.com
Third Place Winner for Fiction
2013 IndieReader Discovery Awards
Finalist 2013 Indie Excellence Awards
Named an "Irresistible Read" by www.compulsionreads.com
Third Place Winner for Fiction
2013 IndieReader Discovery Awards
Finalist 2013 Indie Excellence Awards
Named an "Irresistible Read" by www.compulsionreads.com




































































